12-18-2015, 09:03 PM
Hey Lyraina, nice work in here. Lot's of improvements.
I actually do like day 14 I think those brushstrokes were placed just right. Very cool painting, almost fantasy like.
For day 13, I would recommend not going so dark with the values, as it kind of muddies everything up. Also, for the brush-strokes in this painting I would just start out with a hard edged brush and block in the important values first before trying to do any smudging. I did a quick paintover here just to show what I mean.
your colors layed over
I actually do like day 14 I think those brushstrokes were placed just right. Very cool painting, almost fantasy like.
For day 13, I would recommend not going so dark with the values, as it kind of muddies everything up. Also, for the brush-strokes in this painting I would just start out with a hard edged brush and block in the important values first before trying to do any smudging. I did a quick paintover here just to show what I mean.
your colors layed over