01-05-2016, 12:49 PM
Because of the photo quality, I'm not sure if the value range is really very light, or just bleached by relfection. Also, it's kind of hard to crit abstract art, not knowing what's going on or what some of those things are. The throne's contact points to the floor should have the darkest part of a shadow, the ambient occlusion shadow. Then the shadow will go from darker to lighter as it stretches away from the object. The fox and the box head outside the window are just touching, and the same with the skeleton's horn and the edge. Those are tangents, and they don't build good compositions. Overlap more or push them apart more. The skeleton confined to the bottom right corner feels kind of separate and left out from the rest of the image.