07-07-2012, 12:58 PM
Solid piece so far man! First thing I noticed thoe is the size of the ear, I see you have it partially missing but even knowing that the size of the ear is just too small for the size of the head. Another thing I noticed is you are not going dark enough with the shadows on his face, you can really make that eye pop if you bring down the value on that side of the face. Since this is a zombie portrait you can also push up the rot/tearing in his flesh, like I did in his mouth. You can also do some stuff to his body, maybe make a hole in his neck and the tongue hangs out!
Hope this helps.
Hope this helps.