07-13-2012, 07:39 PM
soooo
I tried to make a good lighting scene, like described in the Gurney book: last light of the day, only the upper parts of objects are in the light.
I have problems with the cliff, it doesn't really look like stone. I also have no idea what to do with the sky. And the whole Siren seems a little flat, too.
Feedback and Critique of any kind is appreciated!
( I made the Siren blind because I thought it would be cool if they use bat-like vision. You know, making highpitched sounds and see through the soundreflections. Also I made little creepy touches to her, since, you know, they sing so that ships crash on the mountains. They are more monsters than pretty womans.)
![[Image: siren2_by_saraiza-d576ma2.jpg]](http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/195/4/4/siren2_by_saraiza-d576ma2.jpg)
:)
I tried to make a good lighting scene, like described in the Gurney book: last light of the day, only the upper parts of objects are in the light.
I have problems with the cliff, it doesn't really look like stone. I also have no idea what to do with the sky. And the whole Siren seems a little flat, too.
Feedback and Critique of any kind is appreciated!
( I made the Siren blind because I thought it would be cool if they use bat-like vision. You know, making highpitched sounds and see through the soundreflections. Also I made little creepy touches to her, since, you know, they sing so that ships crash on the mountains. They are more monsters than pretty womans.)
:)