03-10-2016, 07:47 AM
Before going into this, let me just say, I super dig the swamp thing figure at the back! And I like your forest rendering. And I think you nailed the atmospheric perspective.
Here's the unpleasant part.
1. Light source. To me, it seems inconsistent. There's a primary light source at the back. Another at the upper right hand side. I think there's another that's shedding light at the intestine.
2. The shadows are too dark (?) I read there's a rule saying that one must avoid overdoing shadows, like sliding the colors too near the blacks. But then again, Frank Frazzetta gets away with this, so not much of a big deal if you can pull it off like he does.
Hope to see more from you!
Here's the unpleasant part.
1. Light source. To me, it seems inconsistent. There's a primary light source at the back. Another at the upper right hand side. I think there's another that's shedding light at the intestine.
2. The shadows are too dark (?) I read there's a rule saying that one must avoid overdoing shadows, like sliding the colors too near the blacks. But then again, Frank Frazzetta gets away with this, so not much of a big deal if you can pull it off like he does.
Hope to see more from you!
If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!
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