crt would help plz

[Gabriel]

ok so i'm back :),
alright i noticed you guys had a little trouble making out what the drawing was sry about that, so here's a little more of a description and what i was aiming for... like Sopasdigital and Myriam was saying it is an imaginary kinda dreamy landscape idea, what i had in mind was a type of winter solstice and summer solstice (day and night) thing at the same time a little bit of a ying yang feel to it (that's the reason why i off set the sun and the moon "69") and at the same time a drawing i could hang ether up or down depending of the sessions :)... you're crts are very use full, thank you very much. you make a good point Sopasdigital about the range of shadow from foreground to background, and adding something a little close to the focal point... and thank you too Myriam you where right it is starts :) i drew them from an old world atlas we have, i did notice what you where saying after i read your comment about the starts and the moon i'll shade the stars a little more and brighten the moon more (although i'd rly appreciate if you could help me out with that, it's the first time i draw starts so i'm a little lost with the shadow ratio between the moon and stars) and i'd kinda prefer to keep the stars since it would be a little hidden secret to make out the big dipper and little dipper and all that good stuff lol... also i'm just starting to try my hand at coloring it's been a year or so that i haven't worked on this to sharpen my skills at painting (on photoshop) lol... so here are some close ups of the night sky and the day, and i also found a big re work i did a long time ago, it kinda address some of your crtz but my painting sucked back then so i left it and it's like re do's of google photos i got off the net so it's not from my imagination witch kinda diss inspired me :(
sry for the long post....

Night sky:
http://a2.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-a...6243_n.jpg

Sunny side up:
http://a7.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-a...4272_n.jpg

and the re-worked job:
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=1...permPage=1

google pics for re-worked jobs,
Right side cliffs:
http://a2.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-a...7518_n.jpg

Left side cliffs:
http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-a...6334_n.jpg

light house:
http://a4.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-a...1222_n.jpg

Mount Everest:
http://a2.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-a...3630_n.jpg

anyways thank you all, and i rly appreciate the help from such great artiest as your selves :D