03-11-2016, 07:42 AM
Lighting is still inconsistent. Why is the light source only affecting the woman and the corpse? The ground, trees etc. don't seem to be affected at all, which is why the chracters look pasted on. You should do some painting from life to get a better feeling for how light interacts with form.
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