03-22-2016, 06:37 PM
Good to see that you have discipline to practice, but I feel that you could start to pay more attention to your lines. They feel almost like you were afraid to fuck up, mainly on the cilinders. People say that it's better to work with your whole arm and not only with the wrist/fingers. At first they will most likely trespass the planes that you drew, but with time you will start to get them right more often than not, and they will look more confident.