03-25-2016, 04:34 PM
Hey,
I like that you have a good grip on your own vision of what you like to see in art with these colorful animal characters. It's really important to keep that original source of inspiration and taste as you go forward with trying to improve your technique and fundamentals.
I'm just going to repeat what some people mentioned earlier; you would really benefit from improving your draftsmanship. You have a lot of energy the loose sketching, but your marks can be simplified and more focused to do more with less. You get a cleaner, more readable result that way.
Proko can definitely explain this concept better than I can
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74HR59yFZ7Y
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ktfwayByRU
Hope that helps!
I like that you have a good grip on your own vision of what you like to see in art with these colorful animal characters. It's really important to keep that original source of inspiration and taste as you go forward with trying to improve your technique and fundamentals.
I'm just going to repeat what some people mentioned earlier; you would really benefit from improving your draftsmanship. You have a lot of energy the loose sketching, but your marks can be simplified and more focused to do more with less. You get a cleaner, more readable result that way.
Proko can definitely explain this concept better than I can
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74HR59yFZ7Y
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-ktfwayByRU
Hope that helps!