Game of thrones/Alchemy WIPZ

[Piotr Jasielski]

Hey, welcome! You have a nice idea and very good rendering. I like the perspective in the intitial sketches better. I think the main issue it that the book shelf is just about 10-20 cm from the wall, that is barely a space for a shelf, yet for a man standing behind it. Maybe you should do some perspective sketches to figure things out. The swords on the banner are really small, I'm not sure if that was intended. I also wonder what is that white thing in the left. Jamie's artificial hand is a bit too small, especially the palm. Otherwise it's really good, probably one of the best rendered pieces so far.

When you feel you're ready, you can post the final in the final thread, but it's still a bit of time to fix some stuff (or you can post it and then edit the attachement if you make some changes).

Good luck!