Andrew's Sketchbook

[Fedodika]

wow nice compositions!

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...?aid=83808 This is your strongest piece i think

I'm seeing a lot of things you need to work on and i think just fixing these things would make your work shine, especially with your rendering style.

You really need to work on your anatomy dude, like this for example

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...?aid=83806

His left (our right) shoulder http://www.tobys-brain.com/wp-content/up...my-arm.jpg It's sinking in instead of rounding out like a deltoid would, almost like there is just a bone there; his neck's too short, his bicep on his right (our left) needs more mass.

his left hand is too small, his neck is really stubby and short, and his crotch area could use a lot of work; It looks sunken in in the front, the way the lines are indicated with the shading. If he's a dude, give him a bulge, even it's just a little. I'm also not buying the way his right hand is connecting to his forearm, hold your hand in the mirror and see if you can get that same pose.

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...?aid=83807
This one has the same issue with the arm, it's not connecting the deltoid to the bicep properly. And she looks like she doesn't have a neck. There's also a tangent where the hilt of the blade meets her hands, it looks like the handle is disappearing.

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...?aid=83809

I see this issue come up a lot in your work and it has to do with line and shape quality in the hands in particular. It looks like you're really struggling to draw them, i'd reccomend practicing to some stylized hands by say comic artists who use really angular shapes

http://comicsalliance.com/files/2015/09/...0&a=t&q=89
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736...c851a8.jpg

Take those for example (Joe Maduriera) How strong the shape is and confident; It isn't lumpy and awkward looking

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...?aid=83814
His right (our left) arm is too short, but also his elbow is just like a noodle, there's no bone indicated.

https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/236...6b8ad1.jpg
https://matthewbilton.files.wordpress.co...rm_03.jpeg

I'd reccomend getting or finding a PDF of Hogarthe's Dynamic anatomy to supplement your studies; i think it'd push you a long way, best of luck and welcome to daggers my friend :)