04-16-2016, 07:39 PM
The storytelling in your latest update is so much better. You certainly turned the dramatic volume up by changing how the your characters act in that scenario.
Hmm.. the environment could use a little bit of destruction maybe? Hat fallen off the floor. Some blood on the streets. Not quite sure..
Unless the monster has an OCD complex and kept cleaning after himself haha!
Hmm.. the environment could use a little bit of destruction maybe? Hat fallen off the floor. Some blood on the streets. Not quite sure..
Unless the monster has an OCD complex and kept cleaning after himself haha!
If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!
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