crit please !
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Problemareas and paintover. Basicly you should push the "depth" in it a bit more. And being more precise in your renderingstyle and less loose would make the picture more tight.
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Also, I'd leave out the plants and fix the perspective a little :) try make a separate layer w. your vanishing point etc.

Hope it helps

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crit please ! - by gumby - 07-07-2012, 12:21 AM
RE: crit please ! - by benjaminbach - 07-09-2012, 03:42 AM
RE: crit please ! - by gumby - 07-09-2012, 09:54 AM

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