environmen study with character.some feedback needed.

[joerdenleigh]

Cool Drawing!

What my thoughts were:

-The moon is a circle thus drawing the attention, the branches do lead the eye but they can be pushed more, the figure also draws the eye but competes with the moon and the circle of light its holding.

-There are many diff ways or directions you could go. I quickly threw some lines down showing some thoughts.

-One major thing I noticed, is the shot could be framed by the branches of the trees and at the same time use the trees to subtlety lead the eye to the figure.

-The background is there however, it feels like its above the canopy so you could fill in some atmospheric tree "tops" below or in the distance.

-As I thought of water below, perhaps the orbs hover in the tree tops or above the potential water?

Like I said there's many options here. Its up to you what you want to focus on , Telling a story of the space? Where the orbs came from? Emphasize the eeriness? Maybe the orb is a blossom from the sublte plants growing on the trees. Composition wise I think its there, you just need to push what you want to push and it will solve its self.

Best of Luck hope I see more!!