12-31-2012, 12:26 AM
Yo Korky, I like your work!
Here is that paint over you didn’t ask for :-)
![[Image: t4PiZ.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/t4PiZ.jpg)
Firstly I like the overall red/ pink hue but because its everywhere the image becomes a tad monochromatic. I over emphasized the eyes with a contrasting green as I felt these got abit lost.
The nose and eyes went quite lining up, so I attempted to fix with liquefy (the dirtiest tool). I have made the hands a tad smaller and emphasized her thumbs, which should help the viewer to read them.
What is your area of focus? Hands then face? Maybe save your highest contrast for these and knock the dark values in the rest down a tad. I started this by making the bottom hand darker so it pops when contrasted with the white of the glowing thing.
Lastly I have really quickly indicated some glow escaping the fingers and maybe you could try to strengthen the lighting with more cast shadows on the helmet and arm.
I hope this helps :-)
Keep on climbing up Mt Drawmore!
Daggers!
Here is that paint over you didn’t ask for :-)
Firstly I like the overall red/ pink hue but because its everywhere the image becomes a tad monochromatic. I over emphasized the eyes with a contrasting green as I felt these got abit lost.
The nose and eyes went quite lining up, so I attempted to fix with liquefy (the dirtiest tool). I have made the hands a tad smaller and emphasized her thumbs, which should help the viewer to read them.
What is your area of focus? Hands then face? Maybe save your highest contrast for these and knock the dark values in the rest down a tad. I started this by making the bottom hand darker so it pops when contrasted with the white of the glowing thing.
Lastly I have really quickly indicated some glow escaping the fingers and maybe you could try to strengthen the lighting with more cast shadows on the helmet and arm.
I hope this helps :-)
Keep on climbing up Mt Drawmore!
Daggers!