All Talk No gunpowder- Piston's SB

[LoosePiston]

Thanks for the sketchbook visit man. first off, awesome proportions and values seem good too. Would agree about the edges thing though. I also leave parts totally unrefined such as the fur hood I can see isn't a mistake you just haven't tried to refine it, but the naked man for example has a lot of soft edges so he reads quite blurry. I would suggest doing a study of a cast or two as they are only one value and only use the hard brush with opacity at 100% and flow at 100% and just try and capture the overall value changes. Hope that helps and really awesome work so far :)

thanks a lot will, im pretty unhappy with my first year work in hindsight (the lacking pieces of which ill post below) need to fix a lot of things but hey itll be fun on the road.



crits much appreciated