05-02-2013, 12:57 PM
Hi Michael. It's a pretty straight forward illustration. I think it could be enhanced by taking your lighting a bit further. You clearly intend for there to be a stong light source coming from the left, which I presume is the sun. If the sun is hitting him like this, it must be pretty close to the horizon which would cast shadows everywhere including your background. Unless there is a secondary light source that's keeping the character illuminated, much of him should be in shadow. While there is reflect light that would allow you to make out many of the forms, keep in mind that he is still promarly in shadow and that the value scheme should at least be much more narrow beyond the terminus. Here's a quick example.