05-10-2013, 07:25 AM
Very cool. My personal preference is the composition on the bottom because i literally feel pulled into the house, where as the top one has a more intimidating look because of the extreme low angle and chaotic ground convergence in the foreground. They're both cool though!
One minor nit-pick from me is that the bottom piece's roof feels a little unfinished or visually disconnected in your treatment compared to the rest of the house because of the lack of variation in tone and texture.. I get that you didn't want to make it a focal point, but if there's a moonlight on the facade of the house, there should be some indication of that on the roof too, even slightly..
Otherwise.. looking pretty frickin cool! ;)
One minor nit-pick from me is that the bottom piece's roof feels a little unfinished or visually disconnected in your treatment compared to the rest of the house because of the lack of variation in tone and texture.. I get that you didn't want to make it a focal point, but if there's a moonlight on the facade of the house, there should be some indication of that on the roof too, even slightly..
Otherwise.. looking pretty frickin cool! ;)