05-23-2013, 04:16 AM
The head looks good, but I'd take a second pass at the body/shirt. The chest looks like it's facing directly towards the viewers left, it has no depth. But the way the shirt collar has been drawn looks like it's pointing more towards the viewer, in a 3/4 angle. I think you did a great job with the mouth, and the skin looks well rendered around the eye, so I think you should definitely revise the body.
Hope this makes sense, and helps.
Hope this makes sense, and helps.