02-19-2019, 11:15 PM
Hey Eraisu, I wanted to thank you for your long comment about making finished work and such, and i will reply later today to that.
As for your work, i think you should invest some serious time into really honing your knowledge of perspective and anatomy. Focus on shading limbs and muscles well, say how proko would do it, and that knowledge of planes and form will carry over into everything really. I feel like you are kinda playing with edges, but in your imaginative work it seems to be lost. The metallic object for instance is just all hard shapes, and believe it or not just knowing how to properly shade a bicep can teach you 80% of what youd need to know to fix that :D
thats my take on it, it looks you want to do character driven stuff so focus on that. Who are the people you want to draw, try to explore that dimension and draw them how they appear in your head. Pull all the inspiration you can find to get them out, are they evil, sexy, kind hearted, modern, ancient, future, etc. write it down and start generating those clues to get closer to what you want to see, glad your back,
maybe we can pick this forum up out of its long nap ;)
As for your work, i think you should invest some serious time into really honing your knowledge of perspective and anatomy. Focus on shading limbs and muscles well, say how proko would do it, and that knowledge of planes and form will carry over into everything really. I feel like you are kinda playing with edges, but in your imaginative work it seems to be lost. The metallic object for instance is just all hard shapes, and believe it or not just knowing how to properly shade a bicep can teach you 80% of what youd need to know to fix that :D
thats my take on it, it looks you want to do character driven stuff so focus on that. Who are the people you want to draw, try to explore that dimension and draw them how they appear in your head. Pull all the inspiration you can find to get them out, are they evil, sexy, kind hearted, modern, ancient, future, etc. write it down and start generating those clues to get closer to what you want to see, glad your back,
maybe we can pick this forum up out of its long nap ;)
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]