Two-Character Illustration Critique
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Thanks very much for you input!

Good advice about the lighting. I added some more defined light and shadow for now, but I think it would be better to add them after the characters are worked out.

The robot character's anatomy was designed as it is for reasons of functionality (longer limbs to both extend reach and increase foot speed, with the arms acting as counterweights.), but I added a recognizable object (a signpost) to give the viewer a reference for scale. His head is mean to be a to-scale human sized head on an exaggerated body.

I changed up the girl's pose to give a little clearer context for the picture.

I'd love to hear any more advice or critique, I really appreciate it!
-thanks


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Two-Character Illustration Critique - by SaidTheJoker - 07-01-2013, 11:55 AM
RE: Two-Character Illustration Critique - by MissLillyArt - 07-01-2013, 04:07 PM
RE: Two-Character Illustration Critique - by SaidTheJoker - 07-02-2013, 06:24 AM
RE: Two-Character Illustration Critique - by SaidTheJoker - 07-06-2013, 01:04 PM
RE: Two-Character Illustration Critique - by SaidTheJoker - 07-08-2013, 01:49 AM
RE: Two-Character Illustration Critique - by SaidTheJoker - 07-11-2013, 02:38 AM
RE: Two-Character Illustration Critique - by SaidTheJoker - 07-12-2013, 05:05 AM
RE: Two-Character Illustration Critique - by SaidTheJoker - 07-16-2013, 12:15 PM
RE: Two-Character Illustration Critique - by SaidTheJoker - 11-10-2013, 10:37 AM
RE: Two-Character Illustration Critique - by SaidTheJoker - 11-16-2013, 07:21 AM
RE: Two-Character Illustration Critique - by meat - 11-16-2013, 08:31 AM

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