Two-Character Illustration Critique

[SaidTheJoker]

Good point about the perspective. I opened up the file and realized that I was tending to slightly look down at my monitor, which put me at eye level with the tall character, so the thought about looking up may not have ever even occurred to me!

And thank you very much for that grayscale sketch, it more-or-less answers all the questions I still had about the background details, shadows, perspective, etc.

I'll be sure to show the results of your critiques :)