10-05-2013, 11:55 AM
I agree with Madzia. There are also some perspective issues because it is a somewhat curvilinear perspective you are using so the distant trees seem off especially at their base. I did a quick paintover. Extended the canvas, created a focal point, exaggerated lighting and tried to add depth in foreground and fix some of the perspective issues, though not fully.
I think you are right that you should focus on comp and design not just rendering so since this piece has the possibility of nice shadow vs light shapes you could really think about using the abstract design of the shadowing and the lit snow areas to help drive the composition even more. Those very straight shadow shapes could be made a lot more interesting.
I think you are right that you should focus on comp and design not just rendering so since this piece has the possibility of nice shadow vs light shapes you could really think about using the abstract design of the shadowing and the lit snow areas to help drive the composition even more. Those very straight shadow shapes could be made a lot more interesting.