10-14-2013, 07:21 PM
Maybe something like this?
- less saturated background
- less saturated, darker shoulder
- bigger contrast on the head (make the planes of the head visible - divide front plane from side plane and top plane more)
- model 3d shapes with light a bit more
- add the most contrast and saturation to your focal point only
Of coz, that's my opinion and your artwork... so see how it works for you, do what you feel is good for you. :)
- less saturated background
- less saturated, darker shoulder
- bigger contrast on the head (make the planes of the head visible - divide front plane from side plane and top plane more)
- model 3d shapes with light a bit more
- add the most contrast and saturation to your focal point only
Of coz, that's my opinion and your artwork... so see how it works for you, do what you feel is good for you. :)
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My Sketchbook (critique welcome)
My Sketchbook (critique welcome)