I require assistance!
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I like your use of texture and the details on the horse are great! But I think the elf girl, in general looks way too flat. I mean, the horse's head? It looks almost 3d! But the elf looks like she was made of cardboard. Whatever you did to the horse, you should apply it to the elf girl. Maybe she was not finished yet, though.
Also, I think the yellow background looks too empty. You're showing a good use of perspective and an excellent use of texture, I think you could add some details in the back that give it some context, with no problem.
My humble 2 cents, great work.

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I require assistance! - by Zesiul - 10-23-2013, 09:12 AM
RE: I require assistance! - by Rognoll - 10-23-2013, 09:37 AM
RE: I require assistance! - by kerm - 10-23-2013, 05:57 PM
RE: I require assistance! - by Amit Dutta - 10-23-2013, 08:46 PM
RE: I require assistance! - by Zesiul - 10-25-2013, 03:02 AM

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