Seeking critique on a character render!

[Olphelia]

Thanks so much NC for pointing out those issues, I couldn't just seem to see them.

I'll try playing around with her forearm/grip, originally I had her hand placement all this-



Which looks a bit more 'powerful' now that I look at it again, but I cant remember exactly why I deviated from it.

I think I'll take a few reference shots to see what might work better. Thanks again![/php] :)