06-08-2014, 08:30 AM
Hey Cyprinus, thanks for commenting in my sketchbook and joining in on the last Crimson Arena challenge :)
Your stuff is looking really great and I'm liking the dedication you're putting in. I think what you should keep considering though while working is Sam's first post on the first page (I believe it was the first). The one where he talked about over exaggerating the gestures of the figures. Right now your figures seem too anatomical almost. Like you're breaking down the figure into limbs and not a gesture. Break down the arm into one line. It's really all that's necessary. Try to think more about the gesture and learn the points where "C" and "S" curves appear on the body and when. I think practicing that can really help your poses from imagination :)
Your stuff is looking really great and I'm liking the dedication you're putting in. I think what you should keep considering though while working is Sam's first post on the first page (I believe it was the first). The one where he talked about over exaggerating the gestures of the figures. Right now your figures seem too anatomical almost. Like you're breaking down the figure into limbs and not a gesture. Break down the arm into one line. It's really all that's necessary. Try to think more about the gesture and learn the points where "C" and "S" curves appear on the body and when. I think practicing that can really help your poses from imagination :)