Need crit and advice please.
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This is really nice work! The main thing that is tripping me up right now is the relationship between foreground and background. I think I'm supposed to read the image as a normal-sized lady with some normal-sized architecture in the background, but right now, it looks like she's standing right next to it, making either her big, or the buildings little. I'm not sure what the solution is. Maybe some middle ground to separate the two? Or maybe scale one or the other?

Also, the shoe. It's probably just the design of the shoe, not the anatomy, but her foot looks kind of stubby.

I really love the colors in this piece. Good work!



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Need crit and advice please. - by Harfolorun - 04-15-2014, 08:44 PM
RE: Need crit and advice please. - by Psychotime - 04-15-2014, 09:20 PM
RE: Need crit and advice please. - by par gin - 04-15-2014, 10:01 PM

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