Apollo Illustration in Need Critique and/or Paintover asap

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Okay this version is a bit further along and I tried fixing some of the anatomy issues

The face is looking more natural definitely. You'll need to move that neck muscle forward to meet with the ear and the jaw too. One of the arm still look much shorter than the other, but you might just make that a note for next painting if repainting here is too much work for you atm.