Critiques the shit out of my work, please
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(03-25-2015, 11:24 AM)NickShepherd Wrote: Hi Amit,
Cheers for the feedback. I'll have to get stuck into doing some studies of different materials. I also have to work on having smoother tonal transitions over the forms.
Thanks once again for the detailed and well thought out feedback!

Here is my latest drawing. It is fan art of Akira. Tetsuo's Akira transformation.
Not sure if the perspective is corrects. Also, I want Tetsuo to be more threatening. When I paint it I would like to give Tetsuo more tentacles which are coming forward towards the viewer and are threatening Kaneda. Also, I need to work on Kaneda's bike to make it look more like the original. Anyway, enough with the self critique. What do you all think?


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RE: Critiques the shit out of my work, please - by NickShepherd - 03-31-2015, 07:17 PM

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