09-30-2017, 02:12 PM
did a quick paint over for ya, hope it helps
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i just altered it how i would have for myself. please dont take this like im tryna be mean or anything.
in your version it feels like a guy in a dragon suit interrupted their conversation.
i tried to make it feel more threatening by lowering its posture and having them more in a position braced and ready
as a bit of added story i put her kinda holding him back a little like she has some hesitation about attacking.
changed the dragons color a bit to make it less day time kids show and put a warm photo filter to unify the colors of the piece.
practice feeling the story of the scene a bit more, get into the heads of your characters and feel how your body wants to move if you were in that situation.
you have some nice work. keep it up!
i just altered it how i would have for myself. please dont take this like im tryna be mean or anything.
in your version it feels like a guy in a dragon suit interrupted their conversation.
i tried to make it feel more threatening by lowering its posture and having them more in a position braced and ready
as a bit of added story i put her kinda holding him back a little like she has some hesitation about attacking.
changed the dragons color a bit to make it less day time kids show and put a warm photo filter to unify the colors of the piece.
practice feeling the story of the scene a bit more, get into the heads of your characters and feel how your body wants to move if you were in that situation.
you have some nice work. keep it up!