Harsh Crits Needed & Help Me Tell the Story
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Hello! I also found the legs a little unnecessary, I think it is not clear that she is sleeping, that seems kind of uncomfortable stay with the legs as well.
Maybe you could make the fly half grotesque, human and fly between, you know? who has hands to show that he is stealing the necklace himself.
Its yield is beautiful, the body is perfect!
Sorry about the superficial help, but that this painting took me too .. How to make a fly stealing a necklace without sounding lame. But that's it :)
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RE: Harsh Crits Needed & Help Me Tell the Story - by Milena Mantovani Buzzinaro - 08-03-2016, 06:01 AM

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