CC4: Jonny's Comic

[JyonnyNovice]

Amit Thanks for the great feedback! I agree there needs to be another step before the overdose panel. Trying to work something in!

Neo No probs neo! I was pretty surprised anyone got it at this stage.

Pocket Don't be intimidated! Comics are my goal and my dream so I'm using this challenge to really push myself to do a page thoroughly. Plus I always writes lots of little notes for stuff, it's just the way I do things.

So, tried out few alternate layouts, I won't bother to post them individually since they probably only make sense to me (although you can see the big page here if you want: http://i.imgur.com/OFkj7dl.jpg )



Decided on this layout below (layout F) then trying a few things out on it below that.







This is still just planning, the whole thing will be redrawn once I design the characters, so stuff like perspective and all that kind of stuff is no concern right now.

I'm quite happy with the top portion images - still playing with the text.

I'm happy with the bottom portion too.

The middle section, those 5 - 6 panels need some work still, both for text and images.

As always any feedback greatly appreciated!

EDIT Realised the latest one is possibly even more confusing than the first one.