Razor's 2019 Sketchbook

[Fedodika]

yea these are looking good, i think earlier you might not have been considering the spine, but now with these closeups, they look alot better. I like the edgework on these, despite im guessing youre using the airbrush tool for a majority of it, dont be scared to use the hard brush to start, then simplify the values then use a lower opacity to just blend. Proko has a recent vid with court jones about the big mistakes in digital art and one he mentions is only using the airbrush tool.

Now i see youre adding some angular shapes in some of these, which is fine but consider the purpose for that. for instance:

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...1429/3.jpg

Like the way you indicated the trochanter, its razor sharp, i think if i met a girl whose hips looked like that itd be disurbing, id reccomend just adding a subtle round shape and not literally making every straight line. If youre trying the Daniel keyes only draw straight lines thing, you could do that just shave the angle in sooner so it doesnt have that world of warcraft jagged look.

the last butt is very nice, only thing is remember the space between the spinal erectae can be cut in tastefully with a lasso and airbrush to show those columns roundness, but i get those arent part of what youre focusing on