Meatslurps sketchbook - What I do to get better and have fun

[Fedodika]

Hey there!

I like the world youve created in your drawings, it has a quirky and unique feel to it... As i look through i see sketch after quick idea after quick idea, but whats it all for? Alot of your concepts feel disconnected, like they dont belong in the same world; i think for an appealing portfolio of quick designs, there should be some coherency and symmetry in the designs so they feel cohesive. But thats aside the point, which is my main critique:

I think you need to finish something; like this for example

https://i.imgur.com/cBSYkyZ.jpg

Take that picture, use reference and spend several days on it to really make it rendered well on each material and contour. Its a very cool idea, but i think itd shine so much more with some rendering, even if its a stylized kind of rendering like Dave's comic work, just dress it up more.  youre perfectly capable of drawing a decent character, just dont leave off on it once you throw down a background tone and mask it with a color; push it!