05-01-2020, 08:31 PM
The form reads very well on your last one, face is more appealing overall (I think you wanted to improve on this?) and it all reads quite well. I would point out that there's a mismatch between the hallway and the character legs perspective/angle of view (somewhat), you could hide it by just changing the slope of the ground (lowering the horizon, stretching the walls and doors to fit, maybe? It would be a fake/untrue perspective but I roll with those lately ha ha).
What are your goals with the paintings you are doing? What do you want to tell the viewer or make them see? Sorry if it feels out of the blue but I was wondering since some have quite intensity (like danger) in them but they have also mixed in some mundane tropes? Like this last one has a vamp feel to her, monster hands and piercing eyes, but she's just walking somewhere, like taking a stroll. I almost would expect to see you drawing some Frankenstein monster type seeping tea or coffee from a mug. Ha! That would be rad, I want to try that now.
What are your goals with the paintings you are doing? What do you want to tell the viewer or make them see? Sorry if it feels out of the blue but I was wondering since some have quite intensity (like danger) in them but they have also mixed in some mundane tropes? Like this last one has a vamp feel to her, monster hands and piercing eyes, but she's just walking somewhere, like taking a stroll. I almost would expect to see you drawing some Frankenstein monster type seeping tea or coffee from a mug. Ha! That would be rad, I want to try that now.