Dang! Thank you, I really appreciate this.
Your paintover really helps clarify some of the forms on the face that I was butchering. I don't know why I got so locked into that flawed setup. I definitely need to start bringing in some textures too, I see that now.
And I completely missed that tangent with the book strap! Great catch! I usually try to look out for them, but I absolutely did not see that.
I'll certainly be reworking this tomorrow, thanks again.
Your paintover really helps clarify some of the forms on the face that I was butchering. I don't know why I got so locked into that flawed setup. I definitely need to start bringing in some textures too, I see that now.
And I completely missed that tangent with the book strap! Great catch! I usually try to look out for them, but I absolutely did not see that.
I'll certainly be reworking this tomorrow, thanks again.