03-26-2021, 08:46 AM
Hey Jana. Great sketchbook you have here. I really like the fruit dragon pieces, it's pre cute. You have a good sense of volume in the orange dragon, but it's missing in the lemon dragon. The way the bodies curl around the fruit appears very flat (it's missing form with the bodies not following the curve of the fruit). If you keep up with the drawabox exercises, I think they cover more organic forms and contour lines after the box exercise, so keep going with drawabox! :)