12-16-2021, 09:48 AM
This might be subjective and useless feedback but these are my impressions:
I think the light sources work and read well. The only thing that bugs me a little bit is that I think you went too uniformly light in the highlighted parts or maybe just too dark in the shadows. It's hard to tell what the local color of her skin is. In the mid-tones and shadows it looks like a purple color of middling brightness, in which case the light areas shouldn't be so uniformly bright white (except for speculars).
In this paintover I tried to make the areas of bright cyan more constrained. But to be honest I'm not even sure if I'm full of baloney or not after doing this, so judge for yourself:
I think the light sources work and read well. The only thing that bugs me a little bit is that I think you went too uniformly light in the highlighted parts or maybe just too dark in the shadows. It's hard to tell what the local color of her skin is. In the mid-tones and shadows it looks like a purple color of middling brightness, in which case the light areas shouldn't be so uniformly bright white (except for speculars).
In this paintover I tried to make the areas of bright cyan more constrained. But to be honest I'm not even sure if I'm full of baloney or not after doing this, so judge for yourself: