07-27-2013, 05:59 AM
Heya man! Going to have to agree with Eduardo about the values. I guess you could push the sense of foreground more and seperate the characters.Looks like it's going to be a ballin' piece. Really like the companion studies for it too, they're not overdone and get to the point.
I'm going to go all psychological and ask you questions that hopefully could help you expand the piece! The first thing I'd like to point to is his sword's motion, do you think it needs to finished or could the placement of the sword be midway or even in the beginning of the slash?
Secondly, the composition is quite good right now and it gives a nice sense of scale. But does he need to stand so central to the composition? Could be nice to experiment with how the characters interact with eachother!
You've really grown since the first page mate. It's inspiring to see how well you handle form and texture now. So keep up the work and reach the skiiiees :D
I'm going to go all psychological and ask you questions that hopefully could help you expand the piece! The first thing I'd like to point to is his sword's motion, do you think it needs to finished or could the placement of the sword be midway or even in the beginning of the slash?
Secondly, the composition is quite good right now and it gives a nice sense of scale. But does he need to stand so central to the composition? Could be nice to experiment with how the characters interact with eachother!
You've really grown since the first page mate. It's inspiring to see how well you handle form and texture now. So keep up the work and reach the skiiiees :D