07-05-2015, 08:59 PM
Hey, you got some damn amazing updates here since I last visited! You level up so fast my head is spinning. Keep up the great work!
I really dig the fireman artwork so far, it's very dramatic. Just some thoughts for the logo at the bottom. For my taste, the lines of the leaves (the middle line) align too much with the lines of his legs, especially of the left part, and it kind of distracts me, because like this I kind of keep looking at the bottom part. I'd try breaking the alignment a bit and maybe get some flame elements to lead back to the upper part again. I know though that it's still a wip, so you might change that anyway and the client liked it afterall, so you can probably ignore this.
The last wip really makes me want to venture more into perspective and architecture drawing.
I hope your scanner gets fixed soon!!
I really dig the fireman artwork so far, it's very dramatic. Just some thoughts for the logo at the bottom. For my taste, the lines of the leaves (the middle line) align too much with the lines of his legs, especially of the left part, and it kind of distracts me, because like this I kind of keep looking at the bottom part. I'd try breaking the alignment a bit and maybe get some flame elements to lead back to the upper part again. I know though that it's still a wip, so you might change that anyway and the client liked it afterall, so you can probably ignore this.
The last wip really makes me want to venture more into perspective and architecture drawing.
I hope your scanner gets fixed soon!!