Pnate's Almost Daily Sketchbook

[Jarrad]

in regards to the piece you are working on (two girls with spears), I think it would help if you were clearer with the story. I'm having a little difficulty understanding what the story is. what is the story of the piece?

it also seems like the tree could be a little lighter in values overall so that it competes less with the foreground figure and recedes a bit more. just some thoughts

your sketches and speedpaints are great! the smoker's bar i feel could of had even more haze and smoke with more people suggested in the background!
the cool temperature temple below it is great!