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[Samszym]

This is crazy, I like it! Three critiques: first, the line drawings of the instruments are both making some really nasty tangents with the edge of the image. Second, the lights on your male figure don't feel very distinct, with that fire light I feel the shadows should be harsher. I'd try brightening up the lights and pushing the darks cooler. Speaking of color temperature, third: this image is all warm, and in my opinion without anything near cool to contrast with the reds and oranges they don't look as hot as they could. I'd try bringing in some greys or purples to fix that.

Good luck!