04-20-2013, 12:32 AM
@yololex, man those are great suggestions. I particularly like the idea of having the deaths cost more. I will definitely play with that and see how I can build it in. I know i need to do a bit more fleshing out of the characters just to give some small insights and connection to the reader. I will check out those vids.
I don't really see it as a tragedy even though things don't necessarily pan out for the best. The theme is very much about hope, and I had hoped to leave the reader with an inkling of hope even if very small. :) thanks for the feedback!
I don't really see it as a tragedy even though things don't necessarily pan out for the best. The theme is very much about hope, and I had hoped to leave the reader with an inkling of hope even if very small. :) thanks for the feedback!