Mythtaken and his training collage

[Mythtaken]

really nice progress in this thread! I'm digging so many things. The caterpillar thingy is so great. absolutely love it. As for the latest piece. I must say so far so good. One thing that I noticed is that the bear is roaring at nothing. May be make him scream at someone to make it more dynamic. Great studies btw. These are just my thoughts, I've still much to learn about composition so i'm kinda brainstorming here. Great work through the whole thread though. Keep it up!

You're correct, I won't defend this piece because I honestly think it's weak, but the idea was that they're surrounded by those creatures, so you could imagine there are some creatures behind and around the camera, and the bear is shouting at them. But again, it's a weak piece and I'll most likely not finish it.

Thanks for the critique :)