Tristan's sketchbook
Woah man, you got a seriously awesome SB going in here. I'm loving these las speed paintings, you're really getting the mood down fast and eficient, I really admire that because I'm slow as fuck http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/newreply...id=3081and I eventually wanna be able to do stuff like that, so kudos tu you sir!

Studies are beast too, and great value control My only crit ( very nitpicky I guess) is for your environment pieces.

Generally your figures in those are not really conveying anything meaningfull, sometimes it's that the silouhettes aren't all that strong to reflect any convincing storytelling. The piece with the giant coming out of the see for example, there's a guy just standing like a regular day and making a tangent with the horizon line, and the other one is taking a picture of the giant like if he's gonna show a cool t-shirt he just bought to his facebook pals .( still you did good showing he's taking a pic, but he would need some more action to really convey a sense of fear) This creates a distrophy between a monster with an obvious design going for a scary/creepy feeling against two guys checking it out like a curiosity, since both contradict it kills the potential the piece could have. So maybe my advise would be to focus on the storytelling on those too. You do great when the subjects are the focus and you're really good at conveying mood, so just try to translate that into your enviros and they'll be freaking awesome too.

Hope I didn't come out too douchy, I really like your work man, i'm just a bit blunt with the crits, because that's what I find is most usefull. Keep up the amazing work! ;D

SB
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Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 05-15-2013, 05:09 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 05-16-2013, 06:21 AM
update - by Tristan Berndt - 05-21-2013, 10:36 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Toxicpanda - 05-22-2013, 02:42 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 05-26-2013, 02:23 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by yog joshi - 05-29-2013, 07:54 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 05-31-2013, 08:16 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-08-2013, 12:13 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-08-2013, 08:42 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-12-2013, 06:49 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-14-2013, 12:40 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-15-2013, 07:13 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-09-2013, 10:11 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-12-2013, 12:14 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-16-2013, 04:10 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-23-2013, 09:41 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-01-2013, 02:41 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-06-2013, 09:03 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Bjulvar - 08-06-2013, 09:46 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-06-2013, 11:16 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-10-2013, 01:29 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-12-2013, 06:42 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 10-14-2013, 10:42 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Kaffer - 10-15-2013, 04:56 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 12-15-2013, 08:48 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Adam Lina - 12-16-2013, 03:54 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Mr. Toodles - 12-16-2013, 09:41 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 12-20-2013, 04:42 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 12-22-2013, 10:02 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Jonesoda - 12-22-2013, 02:30 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 12-23-2013, 09:06 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 12-29-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 01-16-2014, 12:48 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 02-05-2014, 10:13 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by hemad - 02-07-2014, 06:35 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Olooriel - 02-07-2014, 07:24 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Wils - 02-07-2014, 07:27 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by milkdose - 02-07-2014, 07:57 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 02-09-2014, 04:32 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 02-09-2014, 07:20 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 02-17-2014, 08:57 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 02-20-2014, 07:34 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 03-07-2014, 06:44 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by MarcCasper - 03-07-2014, 07:22 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 03-09-2014, 06:50 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 03-09-2014, 10:08 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 03-22-2014, 08:11 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 03-26-2014, 05:29 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 03-30-2014, 07:59 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 03-31-2014, 05:51 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 04-06-2014, 02:23 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Archreux - 04-06-2014, 05:19 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 04-06-2014, 06:54 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-04-2014, 05:20 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-05-2014, 06:12 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-06-2014, 04:45 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-08-2014, 02:43 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-08-2014, 06:30 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-08-2014, 08:20 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-09-2014, 04:00 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-10-2014, 02:27 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-11-2014, 01:16 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-11-2014, 10:17 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by LaleAnn - 06-12-2014, 08:11 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-13-2014, 01:31 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by clockodile - 06-13-2014, 08:06 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-14-2014, 10:06 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Flo - 06-15-2014, 06:28 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-17-2014, 12:50 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-17-2014, 08:07 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Kaffer - 06-18-2014, 12:16 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Sirobe - 06-18-2014, 02:35 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-18-2014, 03:55 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-18-2014, 07:39 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Nowio - 06-18-2014, 07:51 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-18-2014, 09:49 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-19-2014, 03:03 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by BenFlores - 06-19-2014, 04:09 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-20-2014, 12:14 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-21-2014, 02:36 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-22-2014, 07:26 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-28-2014, 09:38 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-29-2014, 05:33 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-29-2014, 08:59 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-30-2014, 07:08 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 06-30-2014, 09:43 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-01-2014, 07:38 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by clockodile - 07-01-2014, 08:24 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-01-2014, 06:47 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-02-2014, 01:54 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by MarcRosete - 07-02-2014, 01:58 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-03-2014, 12:41 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-07-2014, 06:25 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Kaffer - 07-07-2014, 07:39 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-13-2014, 08:01 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-17-2014, 05:17 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-18-2014, 05:57 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-19-2014, 06:06 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by rafa zanchetin - 07-19-2014, 01:25 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-19-2014, 09:23 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-21-2014, 04:31 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-21-2014, 07:07 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-21-2014, 11:43 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by rafa zanchetin - 07-22-2014, 01:05 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-23-2014, 03:13 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-25-2014, 08:32 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-27-2014, 05:35 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Patrick Gaumond - 07-27-2014, 05:42 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-27-2014, 08:51 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-27-2014, 10:28 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-30-2014, 08:47 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 07-30-2014, 10:40 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-04-2014, 02:06 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-05-2014, 04:32 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-08-2014, 06:19 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-13-2014, 09:12 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Kaffer - 08-13-2014, 09:49 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-15-2014, 07:44 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by LaleAnn - 08-15-2014, 07:49 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-17-2014, 03:09 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-17-2014, 11:27 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-18-2014, 07:31 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-19-2014, 06:42 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by LaleAnn - 08-19-2014, 04:45 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Suira - 08-19-2014, 11:00 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-20-2014, 09:47 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Suira - 08-20-2014, 10:30 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-21-2014, 10:05 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-22-2014, 02:29 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by LaleAnn - 08-22-2014, 02:48 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-23-2014, 01:59 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-23-2014, 03:26 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by constructicon - 08-23-2014, 06:50 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by RenatoCaria - 08-23-2014, 06:54 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-23-2014, 11:47 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by StardustLarva - 08-24-2014, 01:53 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-24-2014, 04:20 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-25-2014, 05:33 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-26-2014, 12:36 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by nastobi123 - 08-26-2014, 01:04 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by LaleAnn - 08-26-2014, 01:16 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-26-2014, 03:24 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-26-2014, 08:33 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by rafa zanchetin - 08-26-2014, 10:57 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-27-2014, 05:56 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-27-2014, 08:19 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-29-2014, 01:12 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-30-2014, 07:49 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 08-31-2014, 02:31 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-01-2014, 01:31 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-05-2014, 04:48 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by RenatoCaria - 09-09-2014, 12:20 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-09-2014, 05:17 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-09-2014, 07:35 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by LaleAnn - 09-09-2014, 07:49 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-09-2014, 11:05 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-10-2014, 08:51 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-11-2014, 05:56 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by FROZ3N - 09-13-2014, 09:42 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-15-2014, 08:31 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-17-2014, 01:24 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-22-2014, 03:44 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 09-22-2014, 06:08 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Olof - 10-01-2014, 08:24 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 10-15-2014, 09:37 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 10-20-2014, 06:08 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 10-22-2014, 01:07 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 10-22-2014, 07:53 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 10-25-2014, 08:52 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 10-26-2014, 05:05 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 10-29-2014, 09:02 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by LaleAnn - 10-29-2014, 05:54 PM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 10-30-2014, 06:54 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by lungcell - 11-05-2014, 10:33 AM
RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 11-09-2014, 04:53 AM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 11-11-2014, 09:11 PM
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RE: Tristan's sketchbook - by Tristan Berndt - 11-15-2014, 08:57 AM
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