Tyger sketches

[Tul]

Hey, I've been looking at this and I think I can help you with some advice if you care for it.

First off move the head abit closer to the body, it looks like the first reference shot where the head is glancing somewhat upwards, but not since it's slightly lower, so should the head be lower. Also the head seems big because of the size of the hair, just trim it abit from the top side and that might do it.

And you should definatley put back the cape, it kind of fits a falconeer (if that's the word)
Plus it ties the composition if you try making it like below here.

Cheers, sorryf if I was out of line. Just wanna try to help out :D