02-03-2012, 05:01 AM
(02-02-2012, 10:38 PM)Tooth Wrote: This is coming a long great, I love the darker more adult mood going on here, I want to watch it!
Thanks!
Maybe in this version the dad crashes the car from going too fast down that lane and the bathhouse is just some kind of limbo she needs to fight her way out of. Alternative ending...
(02-03-2012, 05:01 AM)The Killer ZEES Wrote: The girl looks great, the background looks a little disjointed from the characters. Maybe if you make the top of houses point towards the top-right edge of the frame. You can still give it a extreme sense of depth that way, plus it with follow with the dragon with sinking into the image. The other thing you might want to think about is making the dragon whiter, that flesh color is making it look a little like a winding phallus.
Good point, I'll swing the house to the right a little!
Haha will do. But who doesn't want to watch a film about a girl who falls in love with a flying phallus...? ;D