02-07-2012, 03:27 AM
The tilted background is interesting but looks odd imo. Maybe giving her a pose that makes sense in relation to the background would help.
I think you're overdoing/misusing the black shadows(especially the shadow around the arm is insane). It makes the shapes fall apart and pulls me out. I'd say paint it a bit brighter and more realistic(where is the light source etc) and then decide on how dark it should be with some filters in the end.
The dragon looked more interesting before you redid the fur. I hope you figure out a way to draw really cool looking fur. Your entry would befit from it greatly.
It's neat how the title is on top of the fur.
Keep it up!
I think you're overdoing/misusing the black shadows(especially the shadow around the arm is insane). It makes the shapes fall apart and pulls me out. I'd say paint it a bit brighter and more realistic(where is the light source etc) and then decide on how dark it should be with some filters in the end.
The dragon looked more interesting before you redid the fur. I hope you figure out a way to draw really cool looking fur. Your entry would befit from it greatly.
It's neat how the title is on top of the fur.
Keep it up!