02-07-2012, 05:23 AM
(02-07-2012, 03:27 AM)bitbof Wrote: The tilted background is interesting but looks odd imo. Maybe giving her a pose that makes sense in relation to the background would help.
I think you're overdoing/misusing the black shadows(especially the shadow around the arm is insane). It makes the shapes fall apart and pulls me out. I'd say paint it a bit brighter and more realistic(where is the light source etc) and then decide on how dark it should be with some filters in the end.
The dragon looked more interesting before you redid the fur. I hope you figure out a way to draw really cool looking fur. Your entry would befit from it greatly.
It's neat how the title is on top of the fur.
Keep it up!
Awesome crit! Thank you. :D I'll change things up tonight.
Yeah I think I want to keep it looking more like scales than fur, but try an not have them so orange because he's meant to be white. Hmmm /:
(02-06-2012, 11:38 PM)Orsvend Wrote: THe whole image is very cool. I'd suggest a warm lightsource in the foreground to really make it pop! Love the tilted background and looking forward to see the finished one!
Thanks!
(02-06-2012, 02:20 PM)jeremygordon89 Wrote: Looking great; I think it could do with some more saturation in some areas though. Looking forward to the final!
Thankyouuu. I'm going to play with the colours tonight so we'll see how things turn out.
(02-06-2012, 02:02 PM)Cricketts Wrote: I really like the one with the house on the tilt. Really good work btw.
Thankyou (: